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YAY

Why did I miss this?! Tell me when you submit stuff, mate! ;D

This was actually pretty good for a school project,
Was your teacher impressed? Did you get any grade?
If so, what grade?
BY THE WAY we had about that thing this flash is about a week ago!!!
HAHAH

Anyway, things to improve on:
- Background is moving? Do you only have one layer?
To get more layers, click the "Insert Layer"-button or
go on the "Insert..."-selection in the top-left-corner.
Then you can have one layer for backgrounds and on
layer for characters etc.
- The text is hard to read. Next time, please fill the chat-bubbles
white, or make the text glow. To make a text glow, go on the
"Filters"-selection next to the "Properties"-Selection.
- The movement is pretty laggy. Use more frames! Or you can
use tweens. (right-click character)

I think you just should quit sprites, and pick up the brush tool. ;)

Other than that, you getting better and better!
- The frames were long enough to read the text.
(very many animations are bad in that thing)
- Good use on the backgrounds. You make the
perfect atmosphere.
- Really good music choice!

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I see you used my song!!!! WEEE, I'm so happy. Thank you. :]

Keep it up, mate. Practise your brushtool-skills please.
You should also try animating your own backgrounds!
(Then you might choose linetool and gradient colors! ;)

-.KrizY.-

SAROTH responds:

Thanks for the advice! Not all of my animations will be sprites, i'm just using sprites for my early animations because they're easy to work with.

Hey mate!

That was awesomly awesome. Well done!!
And congrats on frontpage :D

The Bad:
Well almost everything is perfectly fine, I just have to say that
in the end; The credits came too fast with almost the same music
as earlier. Next time, let it slowly fade out or something, then
go for a more different type of credits-music. Less Beats Per Minute! ;P

The Good:
In the end when he stopped the time and got the man who tried
to kill him, placed him in front of his own bullet, was definitely
the best part.

Thank you for making this, and keep it up :D

-.KrizY.-

Ace0fredspades responds:

Bad:
phhhh... fcuk... THERE are PAUSE BUTTON AND PLAY BUTTON IN CREDITS turn on your eyes!
I listen to my music you listen to yours, that's not your business what music do I chose, if you don't like it create something better with your music.

Good: I will... but I think this is my last stickfight...

HAAH

Pretty good mate, I suggest you to cut the "OMG far out view" into pieces and animate the stick with a bigger size. Other than that, BEST STICK COMEDY in
loong time. Thank you for making this, BD, and keep it up :DDDDDDDD

Matt2k8 responds:

lol thanks i wish you submited more things dude =]

Hey ey!

I saw your animations "kidz of norway" and left your profile for a while.
And now I'm back here and OMG, Your skills have changed! woo!!
Awesome mate, keep it up. Expecting more from you in the future ^^

oldlyshapedchris responds:

thank you mate!!

PWNAGE

Hey mate :D !! I'm back from my holiday,
coming home to this masterpiece! AWESOME JOB.
I can't believe how you do this. I wish I could animate like you ;D
Keep it up dude, awesum. :3
-.KrizY

Hey man

Congrats on passing judgement dude,
it was worth it. :D
But, give me some more time to read the text.. and..
keep it up!

-.KrizY

CubePanda responds:

Thanks, I'm workin on Episode two, it'll be longer and better.

AHHHRRRRRRRR

That's awesome, dudes.
I enjoyed the whole barrel with smooth animation.
GOOD JOB. ^^

Bertn responds:

Thanks :3

Woah!!

I love this! It's so funny and entertaining!!
You got some special skills, designed for humour ^^
I hope to see alot more animations from you,
please continue with this series. Keep it up!

%uFE43 Krizy

JustSomeKiwi responds:

Don't forget the nice, smooth animation. I'm pretty proud of the animation in the bloopers when the wall is knocked over.

I'll definitely continue with the series, but I'm not churning out an animation a day or anything. Hell, now that I have flash, I don't even have that ability anymore due to the length of these new flashes. (When I was doing GIFs every animation was done within the span of one day, because I couldn't save the work in progress very well.) Just keep an eye out for Episode 3, I'll make it when I feel it's time for another animation. The series might go on hiatus like it's done in the past, but that's just 'cause I'm lazy. It's like what happens to 8 Easy Bits all the time.

In summary, I like getting good reviews, I'm a bit disappointed with the votes so far, buy me some cheese, will make more animations soon-ish.

Too short

This is not an episode, it's an intro! That you got there, means
"lean back and watch teh episode 1"

The music maked me waiting and waiting for "something" that should
happen. Nice! But it never happened anyway so..

And last the graphics... It is black & grey as thousand other stick animations,
with a little red. Sorry, that's boring. You need to improve stuffs here!
Keep it up, I'm waiting for a nice storyline here :)

GeorgeB responds:

Yeah your right, this as I've explained before was because I had a deadline, and with me going on holiday etc. I had very little time to do this. Obviously in my upcoming animations I will not be working to a deadline and therefore will produce far longer films. Thanks for the comment!

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