Krizy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mystic Quest episode 4]

Great storyline :D

This is great improvement from other Mystic Quest episodes ^-^
Some examples are enemies fading out when dead,
figures always moving, no actionscript flaws,
and overall- well worked out episode!

Dude, I want you to know, you're getting better at this :D

CubePanda responds:

Thanks Krizy, Ben returns in the next episode and steals from Ralphs body XD

[When the sky turns green]

lolo

Hey dude, great work! :D

- I see there is a lot improvement from other submissions.
- The graphics can be worked on.
- Excellent music choice! :3 You used my track! :D ...awesome.

There is only one problem with the whole thing,
(yeah, and you may guess it)
EVERYTHING GOES LIKE WROOOOOOOOOM!
I would have enjoyed it much more without the insane speed.
All you have to do is to insert more frames in each keyframe...
(or at least in the ones with text)

Keep up the good work, panda :D

~ Krizy

CubePanda responds:

YAY IT'S KRIZY =D
Thanks for the review dude, and I would obviously have to use at least ONE of your tracks in a flash XD

[The Line Battle]

Hmm... To be honest...

...I think the background ruined it.
It's messed up.
You can't fallow the line-fight correctly.

But that's the bad stuff, like Matt said, you've improved ;)
It's smoother!

...but seriously...dude..
Make your own flash-based and original backgrounds.

~ Keep it up ^-^

Bloodman101 responds:

Okay thanks i still think its better than most people that have had flash for 4 weeks :3

[Getting outta here ep. 1]

Hahah, Gerald has gone mad :3

Well yeah your animation was quite funny...
Some stuff were really bad and some other stuff
were fantastic!
You can pretty much see what stuff you've put effort in, lol :D

Nice music choice, good storyline, the voiceacting was not the best,
but keep it up! And, MORE COLORS DAMNIT !
Moar effort to backgrounds! :D

Please don't take so much time at ep 2! lol ^^
Whatever you do, finish it! If you got some ideas for it,
write it down immediately! ;)
Keep it up, dude !!

Sethdd responds:

thanks for the advice i will keep that in mind =D

[Yoyo vs FLLFFL]

Ey Ey EY

I usually don't write to guys who don't respond to their reviews,
but I just had to this time. (lol)
It was touching, it had a great storyline, which provided an awesome
atmosphere and lots of good feelings. ^-^
It also had some humor points, it was not repetive, so they joy of watching
was always on top! :D
Thank you for making this, and I wish you good luck in futured animations! :D
KEEP IT UP DAMNIT >:D

Hyun responds:

Thanks a lot man! ;D

I finally found your post lololol

[JJZK-This is my ringtone!]

Heehee

Awesome choice of music!
Perfect matching illustrations for the "ringtone" too! :D
I recommend you to add shade to your figures.
(a darker color at the sides of 'em)
Keep it up, and keep making anime figures! :3

Jayku responds:

haah thank you :) i will add shade sometime in the future :D

[Kick?]

Lol

Congrats on your first attempt,
it will be a memory of your life as an animator! :3
Well, keep practise practise practise,
and uh... STORY IS EVERYTHING! XD!!!!

I recommend animating with stickmen first,
then go on with your own figures after the basics. ^-^
Keep it up, dude! :D

WilliumBobCole responds:

yes, story is everything... and thats where im going this week... how long it will take me i dont know, but im gonna get some rest n start first thing in the morning hopefully

thanks for the comments :) i take all on board except people like OMGWTF GTFO U SUCK MAN I CAN MAKE ANIMASHUND WELL BETTA THAN YU I JUST DONT NEED TO COZ I HAVE A GURLFREND N EVRIFING N THIS FING CALLED A LIF, YER, ASSHOLE!!!
... people like that

lmao ;P

[Moles Mission]

HAHAHA

"Food is good, exercise is bad lol"
"OMG MUFFIN GUN"
"Anthony is not here ..... Now go away"
"TASTE MY MUFFINS!" "Yummy :3"

LOLOLOO

Big dude, this is awesome.
- Funny things happen through the whole flash,
only the end is missing!
- If you had something extra funny at the end,
the score would be higher than it is.
- A flash needs a cool beginning and a cool end,
the middle .... just improvise.

Thank you for making this, keep it up ^^

Matt2k8 responds:

Thanks.
I made this quite awhile ago, and the file was a bitch so i had too delete or submit, so i thought why let it go to waiste?

[MostRandom animation EVER]

YAY

Why did I miss this?! Tell me when you submit stuff, mate! ;D

This was actually pretty good for a school project,
Was your teacher impressed? Did you get any grade?
If so, what grade?
BY THE WAY we had about that thing this flash is about a week ago!!!
HAHAH

Anyway, things to improve on:
- Background is moving? Do you only have one layer?
To get more layers, click the "Insert Layer"-button or
go on the "Insert..."-selection in the top-left-corner.
Then you can have one layer for backgrounds and on
layer for characters etc.
- The text is hard to read. Next time, please fill the chat-bubbles
white, or make the text glow. To make a text glow, go on the
"Filters"-selection next to the "Properties"-Selection.
- The movement is pretty laggy. Use more frames! Or you can
use tweens. (right-click character)

I think you just should quit sprites, and pick up the brush tool. ;)

Other than that, you getting better and better!
- The frames were long enough to read the text.
(very many animations are bad in that thing)
- Good use on the backgrounds. You make the
perfect atmosphere.
- Really good music choice!

--

I see you used my song!!!! WEEE, I'm so happy. Thank you. :]

Keep it up, mate. Practise your brushtool-skills please.
You should also try animating your own backgrounds!
(Then you might choose linetool and gradient colors! ;)

-.KrizY.-

SAROTH responds:

Thanks for the advice! Not all of my animations will be sprites, i'm just using sprites for my early animations because they're easy to work with.

[FW:]

Hey mate!

That was awesomly awesome. Well done!!
And congrats on frontpage :D

The Bad:
Well almost everything is perfectly fine, I just have to say that
in the end; The credits came too fast with almost the same music
as earlier. Next time, let it slowly fade out or something, then
go for a more different type of credits-music. Less Beats Per Minute! ;P

The Good:
In the end when he stopped the time and got the man who tried
to kill him, placed him in front of his own bullet, was definitely
the best part.

Thank you for making this, and keep it up :D

-.KrizY.-

Ace0fredspades responds:

Bad:
phhhh... fcuk... THERE are PAUSE BUTTON AND PLAY BUTTON IN CREDITS turn on your eyes!
I listen to my music you listen to yours, that's not your business what music do I chose, if you don't like it create something better with your music.

Good: I will... but I think this is my last stickfight...