This is really nice! :D
You did a really good job making this, Thomas.
I love the backgrounds! Every single stickfight animation
usually needs more of an atmosphere, but you did it,
you're redefining the stickanimation culture,
with epic backgrounds.
You can feel how the stickman fights his way,
not just by looking at the stickmen getting pwned,
but also by the feeling the atmosphere gives.
I got some criticism/improvements though,
the ending was like "Revenge taken" ...
and then... err.. oh yeah.. uh.. *credits scrolls up*
What I mean is... I would've liked if the "camera"
zoomed out as the protagonist walked to get
his bag or something, (What was in that bag? lol)
then fade out to credits!...Something like that! :3
...or any kind of "fade out"-ending, to make the
viewer of the animation think about what he just saw,
if you know what I mean.
Well yeah, thanks for making this and,
keep up the awesomeness :D
Great storyline :D
This is great improvement from other Mystic Quest episodes ^-^
Some examples are enemies fading out when dead,
figures always moving, no actionscript flaws,
and overall- well worked out episode!
Dude, I want you to know, you're getting better at this :D
Thanks Krizy, Ben returns in the next episode and steals from Ralphs body XD
Hey dude, great work! :D
- I see there is a lot improvement from other submissions.
- The graphics can be worked on.
- Excellent music choice! :3 You used my track! :D ...awesome.
There is only one problem with the whole thing,
(yeah, and you may guess it)
EVERYTHING GOES LIKE WROOOOOOOOOM!
I would have enjoyed it much more without the insane speed.
All you have to do is to insert more frames in each keyframe...
(or at least in the ones with text)
Keep up the good work, panda :D
YAY IT'S KRIZY =D
Thanks for the review dude, and I would obviously have to use at least ONE of your tracks in a flash XD
Hmm... To be honest...
...I think the background ruined it.
It's messed up.
You can't fallow the line-fight correctly.
But that's the bad stuff, like Matt said, you've improved ;)
Make your own flash-based and original backgrounds.
~ Keep it up ^-^
Okay thanks i still think its better than most people that have had flash for 4 weeks :3
Lol nice grandmaster7!
My version in Norwegian:
Roser er røde
Fioler er blå
Hele min base
tilhører deg nå.
HAHAHA, very catchy song, perfect match with the pictures!
I don't know what to say, all my base are very gay LOLOLO :D
nah.. that wasn't funny.. GOOD JOB THO.
(yeah... like you would read this review anyway :p)
Hahah, Gerald has gone mad :3
Well yeah your animation was quite funny...
Some stuff were really bad and some other stuff
You can pretty much see what stuff you've put effort in, lol :D
Nice music choice, good storyline, the voiceacting was not the best,
but keep it up! And, MORE COLORS DAMNIT !
Moar effort to backgrounds! :D
Please don't take so much time at ep 2! lol ^^
Whatever you do, finish it! If you got some ideas for it,
write it down immediately! ;)
Keep it up, dude !!
thanks for the advice i will keep that in mind =D
Ey Ey EY
I usually don't write to guys who don't respond to their reviews,
but I just had to this time. (lol)
It was touching, it had a great storyline, which provided an awesome
atmosphere and lots of good feelings. ^-^
It also had some humor points, it was not repetive, so they joy of watching
was always on top! :D
Thank you for making this, and I wish you good luck in futured animations! :D
KEEP IT UP DAMNIT >:D
Thanks a lot man! ;D
I finally found your post lololol
Awesome choice of music!
Perfect matching illustrations for the "ringtone" too! :D
I recommend you to add shade to your figures.
(a darker color at the sides of 'em)
Keep it up, and keep making anime figures! :3
haah thank you :) i will add shade sometime in the future :D
Congrats on your first attempt,
it will be a memory of your life as an animator! :3
Well, keep practise practise practise,
and uh... STORY IS EVERYTHING! XD!!!!
I recommend animating with stickmen first,
then go on with your own figures after the basics. ^-^
Keep it up, dude! :D
yes, story is everything... and thats where im going this week... how long it will take me i dont know, but im gonna get some rest n start first thing in the morning hopefully
thanks for the comments :) i take all on board except people like OMGWTF GTFO U SUCK MAN I CAN MAKE ANIMASHUND WELL BETTA THAN YU I JUST DONT NEED TO COZ I HAVE A GURLFREND N EVRIFING N THIS FING CALLED A LIF, YER, ASSHOLE!!!
... people like that
"Food is good, exercise is bad lol"
"OMG MUFFIN GUN"
"Anthony is not here ..... Now go away"
"TASTE MY MUFFINS!" "Yummy :3"
Big dude, this is awesome.
- Funny things happen through the whole flash,
only the end is missing!
- If you had something extra funny at the end,
the score would be higher than it is.
- A flash needs a cool beginning and a cool end,
the middle .... just improvise.
Thank you for making this, keep it up ^^
I made this quite awhile ago, and the file was a bitch so i had too delete or submit, so i thought why let it go to waiste?
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