Score: 7

"Great storyline :D"

submission: Mystic Quest ep 4 srs 1

date: November 29, 2009

This is great improvement from other Mystic Quest episodes ^-^
Some examples are enemies fading out when dead,
figures always moving, no actionscript flaws,
and overall- well worked out episode!

Dude, I want you to know, you're getting better at this :D

Score: 8

"lolo"

submission: When the sky turns green

date: July 21, 2009

Hey dude, great work! :D

- I see there is a lot improvement from other submissions.
- The graphics can be worked on.
- Excellent music choice! :3 You used my track! :D ...awesome.

There is only one problem with the whole thing,
(yeah, and you may guess it)
EVERYTHING GOES LIKE WROOOOOOOOOM!
I would have enjoyed it much more without the insane speed.
All you have to do is to insert more frames in each keyframe...
(or at least in the ones with text)

Keep up the good work, panda :D

~ Krizy

Score: 6

"Hmm... To be honest..."

submission: The Line Battle

date: June 17, 2009

...I think the background ruined it.
It's messed up.
You can't fallow the line-fight correctly.

But that's the bad stuff, like Matt said, you've improved ;)
It's smoother!

...but seriously...dude..
Make your own flash-based and original backgrounds.

~ Keep it up ^-^

Score: 10

"Lol nice grandmaster7!"

submission: all yor base r blong 2 us

date: May 12, 2009

My version in Norwegian:
Roser er røde
Fioler er blå
Hele min base
tilhører deg nå.

HAHAHA, very catchy song, perfect match with the pictures!
I don't know what to say, all my base are very gay LOLOLO :D
nah.. that wasn't funny.. GOOD JOB THO.
(yeah... like you would read this review anyway :p)

Score: 8

"Hahah, Gerald has gone mad :3"

submission: Getting outta here ep. 1

date: May 12, 2009

Well yeah your animation was quite funny...
Some stuff were really bad and some other stuff
were fantastic!
You can pretty much see what stuff you've put effort in, lol :D

Nice music choice, good storyline, the voiceacting was not the best,
but keep it up! And, MORE COLORS DAMNIT !
Moar effort to backgrounds! :D

Please don't take so much time at ep 2! lol ^^
Whatever you do, finish it! If you got some ideas for it,
write it down immediately! ;)
Keep it up, dude !!

Score: 10

"Ey Ey EY"

submission: Yoyo vs FLLFFL

date: May 9, 2009

I usually don't write to guys who don't respond to their reviews,
but I just had to this time. (lol)
It was touching, it had a great storyline, which provided an awesome
atmosphere and lots of good feelings. ^-^
It also had some humor points, it was not repetive, so they joy of watching
was always on top! :D
Thank you for making this, and I wish you good luck in futured animations! :D
KEEP IT UP DAMNIT >:D

Score: 10

"Heehee"

submission: JJZK-This is my ringtone!

date: March 24, 2009

Awesome choice of music!
Perfect matching illustrations for the "ringtone" too! :D
I recommend you to add shade to your figures.
(a darker color at the sides of 'em)
Keep it up, and keep making anime figures! :3

Score: 4

"Lol"

submission: Kick?

date: March 20, 2009

Congrats on your first attempt,
it will be a memory of your life as an animator! :3
Well, keep practise practise practise,
and uh... STORY IS EVERYTHING! XD!!!!

I recommend animating with stickmen first,
then go on with your own figures after the basics. ^-^
Keep it up, dude! :D

Score: 8

"HAHAHA"

submission: Moles Mission

date: November 16, 2008

"Food is good, exercise is bad lol"
"OMG MUFFIN GUN"
"Anthony is not here ..... Now go away"
"TASTE MY MUFFINS!" "Yummy :3"

LOLOLOO

Big dude, this is awesome.
- Funny things happen through the whole flash,
only the end is missing!
- If you had something extra funny at the end,
the score would be higher than it is.
- A flash needs a cool beginning and a cool end,
the middle .... just improvise.

Thank you for making this, keep it up ^^

Score: 6

"YAY"

submission: MostRandom animation EVER

date: October 19, 2008

Why did I miss this?! Tell me when you submit stuff, mate! ;D

This was actually pretty good for a school project,
Was your teacher impressed? Did you get any grade?
If so, what grade?
BY THE WAY we had about that thing this flash is about a week ago!!!
HAHAH

Anyway, things to improve on:
- Background is moving? Do you only have one layer?
To get more layers, click the "Insert Layer"-button or
go on the "Insert..."-selection in the top-left-corner.
Then you can have one layer for backgrounds and on
layer for characters etc.
- The text is hard to read. Next time, please fill the chat-bubbles
white, or make the text glow. To make a text glow, go on the
"Filters"-selection next to the "Properties"-Selection.
- The movement is pretty laggy. Use more frames! Or you can
use tweens. (right-click character)

I think you just should quit sprites, and pick up the brush tool. ;)

Other than that, you getting better and better!
- The frames were long enough to read the text.
(very many animations are bad in that thing)
- Good use on the backgrounds. You make the
perfect atmosphere.
- Really good music choice!

--

I see you used my song!!!! WEEE, I'm so happy. Thank you. :]

Keep it up, mate. Practise your brushtool-skills please.
You should also try animating your own backgrounds!
(Then you might choose linetool and gradient colors! ;)

-.KrizY.-